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By: Weekly Poetry Prompt Round-Up One | Pen Me A Poem

Weekly Poetry Prompt Round-Up One | Pen Me A Poem — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 22:39:38 +0000

[...] Rice uses short repetition, indicative of thoughts flickering through the mind, throughout ‘Stifled Serenade from the Soul‘. This is perfect for an internal reflective piece about romance and the pains associated [...]

By: novelistkat

novelistkat — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 23:45:25 +0000

Thunderror – that’s a nice little line, are you a poet too?

Scott – thanks so much, I really wanted that intense feeling

Edward – Thank you so much, your compliment means a lot to me, and I’m also really glad the imagery came through. I’m really excited about your contest, if I start getting any kind of readership I’ll be sure to promote it.

By: Edward

Edward — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 21:52:31 +0000

I must say I think the third section especially is wonderful. You’ve provided a window into the feelings and desires expressed in your well chosen words.

“The raw pain of romance fills my lungs so I cannot speak”

This line shot out. Perfectly true and something all people will relate to.

The short repetition you use throughout is indicative of thoughts flickering through the mind which I took from this piece.

Wonderful writing.

By: Scott Killen

Scott Killen — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 12:40:08 +0000

I like this. The imagery is strong and emotional.

By: thunderror

thunderror — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 11:43:24 +0000

That sounds so good..like a fresh breeze on lovely morning in spring…